4 thoughts on “Baruz revises

  1. Ah yes, the fabled Kelmscott Chaucer. If only someone had picked it up for me when he had the chance. :.)

    Decreased business: “My business is none of yourn!” To my ear, “less busy” sounds the most natural, but messes with the balanced parallelism of the sentence. “Decreased clutter,” perhaps, or “cleaner look?”

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