Rough Days for a Gentil Knight gets a makeover.
Increased legibility, decreased business, bigger type, cooler colors.
Looks nice, Allan. Now you need to find a pic of that Kelmscott Chaucer to fade under the upper left there…
Rough Days for a Gentil Knight gets a makeover.
Increased legibility, decreased business, bigger type, cooler colors.
Looks nice, Allan. Now you need to find a pic of that Kelmscott Chaucer to fade under the upper left there…
Doesn’t he ever. (Look nice in his new togs!)
A Kelmscott Chaucer sounds like a nice idea…
re-reading, “business”, although used properly, reads oddly.
less “busy-ness” might also work.
Ah yes, the fabled Kelmscott Chaucer. If only someone had picked it up for me when he had the chance. :.)
Decreased business: “My business is none of yourn!” To my ear, “less busy” sounds the most natural, but messes with the balanced parallelism of the sentence. “Decreased clutter,” perhaps, or “cleaner look?”
cleaner look, without a doubt.