Rough Days for a Gentil Knight gets a makeover.
Increased legibility, decreased business, bigger type, cooler colors.
Looks nice, Allan. Now you need to find a pic of that Kelmscott Chaucer to fade under the upper left there…
Doesn't he ever. (Look nice in his new togs!)
A Kelmscott Chaucer sounds like a nice idea...
Posted by: Felicity at January 23, 2003 9:04 PMre-reading, "business", although used properly, reads oddly.
less "busy-ness" might also work.
Posted by: mike at January 23, 2003 9:10 PMAh yes, the fabled Kelmscott Chaucer. If only someone had picked it up for me when he had the chance. :.)
Decreased business: "My business is none of yourn!" To my ear, "less busy" sounds the most natural, but messes with the balanced parallelism of the sentence. "Decreased clutter," perhaps, or "cleaner look?"
Posted by: Allan at January 24, 2003 8:47 PMcleaner look, without a doubt.
Posted by: mike at January 24, 2003 11:25 PM
